I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sione, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. I like it how you included a sentence to say what you have been learning about. If you go back to your cybersmart folder and open your visual profile, you can double click on where it says 'Write your name here' and type in your name. You could even change the font and the colour to personalise it.
Kia Ora my name is Paytonn from Kaikohe West School. I like how you included all the things you like. Maybe next time add punctuation. Also why did you make this blog and what was challenging to make it?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Sione, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. I like it how you included a sentence to say what you have been learning about. If you go back to your cybersmart folder and open your visual profile, you can double click on where it says 'Write your name here' and type in your name. You could even change the font and the colour to personalise it.
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ReplyDeleteI am a student at Matawai School.
I love your post you put up. I like going on holidays too and I LOVE playing soccer!
Kia Ora my name is Paytonn from Kaikohe West School. I like how you included all the things you like. Maybe next time add punctuation. Also why did you make this blog and what was challenging to make it?
ReplyDeletehi my name is Patrick i like how you route about your self it so cool hope you enjoy what you a doing bye
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