I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Funny story....now just imagine if you had to go live in Africa on the savannah like a Giraffe (eating leaves and living like other giraffes) THEN the giraffe had to come live like a human in a house and eat your food. I would love to see that story...
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Wonderful writing Sione! The more writing you do the better you will get. Keep practising by writing every day.
ReplyDeleteFunny story....now just imagine if you had to go live in Africa on the savannah like a Giraffe (eating leaves and living like other giraffes) THEN the giraffe had to come live like a human in a house and eat your food. I would love to see that story...
ReplyDeleteHi Sione,Im Fraise from rm9 I find this funny 😂 and interesting,Great job.
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