I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great use of your imagination Sione with this prompt. I like the way you described the sight of the rocket going up into the sky and smoke coming down to the beach.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Great use of your imagination Sione with this prompt. I like the way you described the sight of the rocket going up into the sky and smoke coming down to the beach.
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