I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
It is lovely to read some of your writing Sione! Great work adding speech marks into your writing. Which friends came to your house? What did you eat at KFC? What is your favourite things to order when you go to KFC? Including as much detail as you can in your writing will make it even better. Keep up the great work :)
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It is lovely to read some of your writing Sione! Great work adding speech marks into your writing. Which friends came to your house? What did you eat at KFC? What is your favourite things to order when you go to KFC? Including as much detail as you can in your writing will make it even better. Keep up the great work :)
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