I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sione My name is Ocean-lee and I am from Kaikohe West School I really like how you combined colours and used lot's of different shapes. But next time you should talk a bit about your collage but I liked what you did. If you want to look at my blog here's the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora Sione My name is Paytonn and I'm from Kaikohe West School. I liked that you used lots of colours and shapes and that you said what it was. Maybe next time you should say why you made this and show how you made it. Did you think about adding punctuation.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Sione I like your zombie and I like the way you Made your collage and The Background and I like the face and the Skin. Have a Good Weekend.
ReplyDeletehi sione your one looks weird what is it called
ReplyDeleteHello Sione it is us, Limihai and Cairo we like the way your collage looks. And does it have a name and does it do stuff bye have a good weekend.
ReplyDeleteHi sione our names are Luisa and Zhane we like how you tried to do your best you should name it sione like you have a good weekend blog you later
ReplyDeleteHi Sione My name is Ocean-lee and I am from Kaikohe West School I really like how you combined colours and used lot's of different shapes. But next time you should talk a bit about your collage but I liked what you did. If you want to look at my blog here's the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHmmm interesting...
ReplyDeleteBut GOOD!
Kia Ora Sione My name is Paytonn and I'm from Kaikohe West School. I liked that you used lots of colours and shapes and that you said what it was. Maybe next time you should say why you made this and show how you made it. Did you think about adding punctuation.
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