I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sione your editing skills are very entertaining and can you teach me how too? because I want to be a cool editer like you. Do some more editing and keep up the good work you doing!.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Sione your editing skills are very entertaining and can you teach me how too? because I want to be a cool editer like you. Do some more editing and keep up the good work you doing!.
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