I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today we were learning about sort of comments and we have to read them to decide if they thumbs up or down and then we put comments to say why we chose that.And the work was so easy and i share it with patrick.
Hi my name is Gerrat I go to Kaikohe West School I think your blog is great. Your work has good comments and bad comments and never put your real address. So people don't now we you live. Your blog has a great picture and good comments.
Kia ora Sione, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your learning through this post, it was so good that you wrote a few sentences to explain what you were learning about because it made it easy for me to understand. It's cool that you got to work with your friend Patrick too, next time try to remember to give names a capital letter at the beginning.
Malo e lelei, our names are Gabby and Teegan. We liked this post cause it has a lot of sentences that makes sense! Also make sure you have capital letter in every name, bye from Teegan and Gabby.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi my name is Gerrat I go to Kaikohe West School I think your blog is great. Your work has good comments and bad comments and never put your real address. So people don't now we you live. Your blog has a great picture and good comments.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sione, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your learning through this post, it was so good that you wrote a few sentences to explain what you were learning about because it made it easy for me to understand. It's cool that you got to work with your friend Patrick too, next time try to remember to give names a capital letter at the beginning.
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ReplyDeleteHi sione you got it all right that`s why its cool
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei, our names are Gabby
ReplyDeleteand Teegan. We liked this post cause
it has a lot of sentences that makes
sense! Also make sure you have capital
letter in every name, bye from Teegan
and Gabby.